
For what were the sacrifices made?
For what thousands of us prayed?
Was it the strong desire of a heart,
That for years has stayed?
Or was it the cry of a woman,
for something she craved?
I ask myself,
Was it worth it?
For people whose fate it changed,
Will it stay forever?
Or will it soon fade?
For people who lost their families and friends,
And for families from which soldiers were sent,
Corpses were the last that reached them.
Then finally my heart answers,
It was for freedom
that the soldiers fought.
It was for freedom,
that we had spent all we had got.
It was for freedom from those,
Who ruined our lives.
And from those,
Who separated husbands and wives.
It was for freedom,
From those whose cruelty took lives.
And from those
Who disrupted happy lives.
Finally what we got was like
Wings to fly away from the dark
And get lost in the stars.
To heal our wounds and
The painful scars.
It was like the bars of a cage had smashed open,
With the power of prayers of uncountable hours.
It was wholly worth it,
From now I know
freedom is what,
is letting me grow.
The country’s wounds are now cured,
And the lives are happy once more.
Freedom to me is like the oxygen of my soul
And the story of some things we lost,
Excellent Priyel….Keep it up
Very good Priyel! Keep it up
Marvellous, excellent, wonderful, touching, a very original feeling expressed by a young mind about our freedom and independence.
Wow it’s excellent, so touching its so good , you have said such a big thing using this poem. You are such a good writer, this is the spirit of nationalism. This poem will always remain in my heart for years.
Priyel, your choice of words takes my breath away… very well written! Keep it up.
Amazing thoughts from one so young. Adults of this world need to learn from you. Priyal you should keep writting.
Very good beta!! Keep it up!!??
Toooooooo…….. GOOD Priyel.
Awesome!
U r blessed patriotic soul?
God bless you dear
Very well written and meaningful poem Priyel..keep it up
Ashwini and Paavani
Beautifully written.. really excellent 😉
Great work!
Great job girl!! U rock!
Very well written dear Priyel. Excellent choice of words and expressions used. Looks like written by a seasoned writer. Keep the flame glowing!!!
Mind blowing!
Well done!! Keep it up!!!